The painting stands out the most due to the color variety, saturation, and color value. You've done a good job distributing the light sources and making sure these interact with the objects they affect. I would like to have seen some more color variation in the flames themselves, though, especially in the core/center where the flame would be brightest/hottest; this would have given the flames more of a pop, and visually make the light they're casting more believable; this isn't so much an issue with the flame in her hand as it is the ones in the lower right of the picture.
The staff is pretty unique looking, but it would have benefited from some extra detail, and perhaps some arcane patterns or symbols to really denote that its a magical staff as opposed to a walking stick or some such. The glow around the top of the staff looks nice, but may be a little too subtle, and blends into the background due to using the same colors. The outlines of the effect are good though, and seperate it enough from the background. The runes on the wall are really intricate and lend themselves well to the atmosphere; they help solidify the character and ground her, providing a focal point for the eyes.
The anatomy is really good also, and perhaps my favorite part; I cannot find much to critique about this portion.
Overall, a solid concept, with beautiful, lively colors that bring the magical aspect of the portrait to life. Good job.
What is Awesome~! The painting is really well done, the shading especially makes it stand out. you have a good grasp on texture of skin and clothes; the folds are also very well done. I like the fire in the corner, it is bright and noticeable, my eye went there first it really adds color to the piece and draws the eye upward to the spell in her hand, then moves down her arm to her and then her staff. The background design is my favourite Very will done
Suggestions: The only thing I can really say is make the staff outline more sharp so it doesn't blend with the background.
Straaaasznie się cieszę bro, że udało Ci się zrobić ten obrazek. To niesamowite, jak długą kolorystycznie drogę przeszedł, ale wyszło mu to zdecydowanie na dobre. Kolory są naprawdę super i zgadzam się z komentarzami, że teraz postać ma fajniejszą pozę, jest bardziej naturalna. I prześwitująca sukienka, bwahahaha. Nie no, ale podoba mi się jak udało Ci się pokazać "cienkość" materiału. Kompozycja jest chwilami niefortunna (OGIEŃ,hothothothothot :<>), ale wiele wynika z tego, że... no, jakoś musiały być te obrazki porównywalne, a i tak już ciężko je było porównać przez różną technikę. No to, bro... więcej malowania, więcej szkicowania, więcej siły i jeszcze więcej postępów!!! Because you're awesome (your awesome 8D).
Nie wiem czy nie wolę starej wersji. Ta jest bardziej efekciarska, owszem, może i przyjemniejsza dla oka, ale tamta miała więcej klimatu, świetny, dopracowany kostur i zupełnie inną, bardziej charakterystyczną twarz <3. Poza tym w tej coś nie gra anatomicznie na poziomie biodra, uda.
Wonderful! It's great to see how much you've improved this piece over the previous version. The figure's pose in particular is much more interesting and organic now, and the color palette you've chosen really brings the piece to life. For a small crit, I think the piece might be better off without that extra fire down in the lower-right corner. It's pulling attention away from the focal point a little and reducing the contrast of the lighting overall, making the fire she's conjuring seem less bright. But again, wonderful piece, and a definite improvement. Keep up the good work!
Thank you so much! I really appreciate your kind words and I'm glad that my improvement is noticeable. And of course you're right about the fire, I wasn't sure about it while paiting, but didn't really know what to do with that part of the picture, so the fire stayed. My mistake.